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Les Wraithlynne · Universal Starfleet Enemy Joined: 16 Dec 2012 Posts: 12

A scout by the name of Spike has returned in his DART with news of foreign shiips in the area. He briefs Queen Les with the news of enemy ships in their region of the Pegasus Galaxy

Queen Les: Are you sure of this? What are they doing this far out in Pegasus?

Spike: I don't know my Queen. If I did I would have given you more information on the
matter.
:turns to walk away:

Queen Les: Don't you turn your back on me little brother
:stands as he turns around:
And watch your tongue.
:thinks a moment:
Take a fleet of seven DARTS with you find out what they are up to,
I'm sure the Primary would love to have a bit of light shown on this
matter as well.
:looks at one of her officers:
You go get us some humans from the Cocoon Hold I am feeling like having
a little snack
:smiles deviously as she sits back in her throne.:

admin · Site Admin Joined: 21 Jun 2011 Posts: 184

*Above has been copied to the rest of the pegasus galaxy story*

Well done on first post very interesting read Very Happy

Les Wraithlynne · Universal Starfleet Enemy Joined: 16 Dec 2012 Posts: 12

Sorry for gramatical errors I write a lot but sometimes my fingers either don't catch up with the thought process or occasionally . ... err... repeat themselves I guess. I get really into the part I am writing about I guess you could say I will do my best to quadruple check such things in the future however. Smile

admin · Site Admin Joined: 21 Jun 2011 Posts: 184

Hi hun, oh dont worry about grammar or spelling, as long as you have fun who cares. I my self get too deep and my fingers run with my brain, not always at same speed lol.

No my only issue, which was not really an issue, was to add this post to the rest of the pegasus galaxy story so that they all flow together Very Happy

I've also replied to it on the pegasus story as Primary queen.

Les Wraithlynne · Universal Starfleet Enemy Joined: 16 Dec 2012 Posts: 12

Oh ok if you would like that is if by clearance I am able I can post whatever parts I write here and on the story line[/u]

admin · Site Admin Joined: 21 Jun 2011 Posts: 184

Yeah sure thats fine, if you copy them to main story too.

Sometimes its good to have seperate posts as it can seem confusing when several blend if they not really related, but the reason I like to keep them all together is so everyone will see them and knows how they flow together.

Of course its only an extra click, but some people just check "the" latest post rather than "all" latest posts lol and might miss something thats really good addition to read.